Sneak peak

Just thought maybe you would like a sneak peak from the book I am workign on?  Let me know what you think? 

Just to let you know I took out a couple of lines just because I could.   

“The rain poured and didn’t look like it was going to stop anytime soon.  The magic though subsided a little on the trail he took to find his sister.  He found some trees that were covering where he hid some on his armor and gear, for a cave only had little protection from thieves.  He stripped off his clothes and put them in the trunk.  He stood in the circle of the trees and chanted an ancient song that he knew since birth.  There was a flash, and Gargan stood feeling the air tangle on his bare skin as human.  His eyes now were slotted and red.  Fangs still remained in his mouth like a panther.  He looked at himself and grew in anger.  He chanted it right and he didn’t change to his true self.  He felt the snap of magic through his body.  Somebody was trying to summon him, but it was weak and he could shake it off.  His sister’s face flashed in his head again and he clenched his fist.” (copyright belongs to Andrew McKay (Robert Yerges) only)

FORGOT TO MENTION STILL BEING EDITTED SO PLEASE BARE ANY MISSPELLINGS OR PHRASES

Published in: on August 8, 2010 at 15:45  Leave a Comment